Things You Should Learn When an Editor Edits Your Book

If you’re a writer, these are things you should learn when an editor edits your book. Number 3 is my favorite.

Ten Things You Should Never Say to an Editor

By Denise Loock


Hiring an editor is wise. But you’ll waste the money you’ve invested if you’re unwilling to accept an editor’s advice. Here are ten things you may want to say to an editor but shouldn’t.

1. No one will notice. No one cares. If you’ve ever noticed a misspelled word or a misplaced comma in a newspaper or on a billboard, you care about accuracy. More than that, though, God cares. He loves excellence. In fact, He demands excellence. Colossians 3:23-25 says, “Don’t just do the minimum that will get you by. Do your best. Work from the heart for your real Master, for God. … The sullen servant who does shoddy work will be held responsible. Being a follower of Jesus doesn’t cover up bad work” (MSG). Ouch. God never excuses “shoddy work.”


2. My friend, an English teacher, told me this was correct. I taught English for 29 years before I became an editor. The differences between English-teacher style and publication style are many. Get the right resources. Here are three: The Christian Writer’s Manual of Style, fourth edition (CWMS); Proofreading Secrets of Best-Selling AuthorsThe Associated Press Stylebook.


3. How will readers get my point if I don’t use italics, all-caps, and exclamation points? Make your words work. Don’t glitz them up with fancy fonts and superfluous punctuation. “The craft of writing involves arranging words and phrases in such a way as to emphasize the important points without depending on typographic peculiarities” (CWMS 77).“Typographic peculiarities” attempt to mask mediocrity with gaudiness. Don’t insult your reader with such shenanigans.


4. Max Lucado does it that way. According to his website, Lucado has sold 92 million books. Yes, he’s successful. But if God wanted another Max Lucado, He would clone him. Be your best self. Find your voice.


5. This is God’s message. I can’t change it. Yes the Holy Spirit impresses on us a message. He reveals fresh meanings and applications in Scripture. But He also uses traditional means of education. Paul’s letters are filled with post-resurrection connections to Old Testament Scriptures. Revealed by the Holy Spirit, yes. But Paul had studied the Hebrew Scriptures thoroughly. He learned under Gamaliel, the most respected rabbi of that era (Acts 5:34; 22:3). Messages need refinement. So do messengers. Just ask Paul.


6. That’s the way I talk (or blog.) The CWMS devotes three pages to the difference between blog style and book style. It covers topics such as tone, structure, transitions, repetition, and references. Learn the rules of good writing and practice them in everything you write.


7. I like it the way it is. Stubbornness is the twin of arrogance. Everyone makes mistakes—writers and editors. But wait at least 24 hours before insisting, “I won’t change it.” Pray about it. In The Canterbury Tales, Geoffrey Chaucer says of the student: “And gladly would he learn and gladly teach.” Wise words.



8. But I love that song (book, speaker). We all have favorite books, speakers, and songs. But that doesn’t mean we insert lyrics, paragraphs, and illustrations from those sources in our books or blogs. Find a fresher way to say it that reflects your experiences, your environment, your interests.


9. I saw it somewhere on the Internet (heard it at church, at a conference, on TV). Documentation is essential. If you don’t know the source, don’t use it. Misquotes and wrong attributions permeate the Internet. Avoid using and And never depend on Wikipedia. Respect the sources you admire enough to read the original version of their words.


10. It could mean that, couldn’t it? Use Scripture accurately and appropriately. Context is everything. Don’t mix fiction with fact. Even if you’re using only one verse, study the context, read a few commentaries, and pray about it.  Research Scriptures as thoroughly as other citations. Plant 2 Timothy 2:15 in your heart and “correctly handle the word of truth” (NIV).


Remember, an editor is your friend. Editors want your manuscript to be the best it can be. Editing is a humbling career. Writing is a humbling career. Neither writers nor editors are infallible. But we both can strive for excellence and make our heavenly Father proud.

(Photos courtesy of Isolated Images, Denise Loock, and Google Photos.)


Denise Loock tells us what NOT to say to an editor. (Click to Tweet.)

Neither writers nor editors are infallible. (Click to Tweet.)

Denise Loock is a writer, editor, and speaker. She is the former editor for The Journey Christian Newspaper, which reaches over 60,000 online and print readers. As an assistant editor, she helps Lighthouse Publishing of the Carolinas produce high quality, engaging inspirational books. She accepts freelance editing projects too. Contact her at

Thanks for humoring me by reading this post. I thought it was wonderful and something every author needs to read. Many authors think they have to put words in italics to make a point. Not so. Write so they know without having to put words in italics. Thoughts can be in third person like the rest of the text. You can even add, “She thought, . . .” No thoughts in italics. Also, capitalized words are shouting words. Instead of making a point by putting all words in caps, think of another way to not shout. Good article. I enjoyed it so much.


Have a blessed day,

Kathy Cretsinger,

Mantle Rock Publishing LLC

3 thoughts on “Things You Should Learn When an Editor Edits Your Book

  1. I really appreciate this. I am working on a teen book that I asked my son — an avid reader, movie watcher, and English teacher — to look over for me. He said, “Mom, you’ve got a good story, but you’ve lost your voice. You’re using (he listed words) that are not you because you are trying to sound edgy. That’s not you. Write your story using your voice, not somebody else’s.”


    • I get a lot of proposals where the author’s voice is not their own. You can tell by reading the first few pages. I’d rather have a book written in the author’s voice. When we try to put words in a book that are not the way we usually talk, it’s not your voice. Thanks, Pam for your comment.


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